Dave, It appears that the internet supplies you with democratic propaganda which you have learned to cut and paste.
There are 5 paragraphs in total. (An applicant applying for a post office might have more)
The first paragraph contains rhetoric becoming a debater. (Say as little as possible in as many words as possible)
The second paragraph talks about the Illinois senate and the earned Income Tax Credit among other bills.
Obama voted for these bills HE DID NOT CREATE THEM.
The third paragraph states " His first law passed was with Republican Tom Coburn" this is his major accomplishment. He road the coattails of a Republican.
The fourth paragraph is all rhetoric with no accomplishment. Here in lies the problem with Obama, it's
all talk and no action. Please read this paragraph and tell me what he did that any other congressman couldn't or hasn't done.
This paragraph states he is proud of his wife and daughters.
Please tell me this is not the best you can do.