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I don't think your auction is too bad...
In Response To: Re: My reply... ()

but

They are the exact same chips being used in real casinos.

Implies that they are chips used in real casinos. How about, "They are exactly the same as chips being used in real casinos." This is accurate, and tells the reader that they are NOT used in real casinos. A simple change.

Just a suggestion.

Michael Siskin

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As part of my campaign - Jim Follis
Gene, you are correct. I did miss your post...
My reply...
Re: My reply...
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Josh
Re: Bob
Well said
Re: Gene
Re: Bob
I don't think your auction is too bad...
I would exclude: "exact" or "exactly" and ...
Better yet, John!! grin Agreed.
I think Josh likes it, too. grin
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Re: What Did I Miss????
Re: What Did I Miss????
I believe you are missing the point Gene...
Re: I believe you are missing the point Gene...
Re: I believe you are not going..
Re: As part of my campaign - Jim Follis
Josh, I'll be happy to answer your question...
Geez - you have some time on your hands grin
Re: Josh, I'll be happy to answer your question...

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